CDC #8 - Double Trouble

Working together, two against many, proving not only your skills as a player but your skills as a designer; create a design that works together as well as you and your partner.

Hello and welcome! This is the Concept Design Contest #8 - Double Trouble thread. Here, over the course of this week, you will create a brand new concept based on the following criteria and provide a link to it here. Please leave a comment if you are signing up for the contest below, and use that comment to deliver the link to the thread. The contest will have three judges, who will each take one week to look over the designs, commenting and helping out with the design. All dates are set to allow the maximum time, and the deadlines will be at 11:59 Eastern Standard Time. The thread must be submitted at exactly 11:59, and there will be no exceptions.

Theme: Each contestant must find a partner to pair up with, and must submit one half of a shared concept. Each pair will be judged as one entity, so make sure you work together well! The concepts themselves may be of any universe or roles, but must be two characters connected together, requiring them to be picked together. This can be similar to Choā€™gall or shake up the formula. However, their abilities must interact in some way.

Sign-Ups Open
Saturday, February 2
Come one, come all! Every sign-up today preferably, but if you missed the day, go ahead and leave a comment over week 1 and you will be accepted into the contest still. The judges will be Bliztron, Labreris, and MrCLFN. Judges are not able to make concepts themselves.

Week One
Sunday, February 3 - Saturday, February 9
This week is for the base concept. This is simply the abilities and the role. Remember, the role is very important, and part of the judging will be on how well the abilities fit together under a role. If it doesnā€™t fit under any role, make sure you make it a Specialist. This is the only week for sign-up, so make sure you give us something before the week is up! I, Bliztron, will be the judge that will comment on the Sunday that follows.

Week Two
Monday, February 11 - Saturday, February 16
This week is for the talents. This means a fully fleshed out talent tree set up with the tiers in order. Make sure your talents are interesting and creative, but still fit with the character and design as a whole. You should touch up on your abilities based on week 1 feedback, as that will also be considered in week 2 judging. Labreris will comment on the Sunday that follows.

Week Three
Monday, February 18 - Saturday, February 23
This week is for the finishing touches. This includes fluff, stats, additional notes, skins, and whatever else you want to add. This has an element of freedom to it, but to give yourself the best shot, you should probably make your concept sell itself. Make the judges become immersed in your concept. MrCLFN will be the judge that will comment on the Sunday that follows.

Week Four
Monday, February 25 - Saturday, March 2
This week is the last week for changes to the concept. All major work should be finished by this week, and major changes are risky. Each of the judges will keep a close eye on the concepts, coming to their own opinions. The judges will have all commented feedback and ratings as they saw fit over the last three weeks, so you will have some idea as to what each of us are looking for. At this point, just make sure to touch up your design and make it truly sparkle.

Finale
Sunday, March 3 - Tuesday, March 5
All changes are closed. The judges will gather to determine who is the ultimate winner of the contest, announcing the winner sometime on Monday.


The following information will be about the judging structure and how points will be fully evaluated. On each Sunday, a comment will be posted with the following rubric filled out, and then another post will be created explaining a detailed analysis on the concept, giving thorough feedback. These points add on to your total, and at the end, each person will have a score out of 60. Make sure you gather as many points as you can during the first three weeks, but do not be afraid if you fall slightly behind, as some promising changes could really make the difference in the final week.

Individual Judges
-/5 Creativity
-/5 Cohesiveness
-/5 Thematic
-/5 Interaction


-/20 Total

Final Week
-/10 Creativity
-/10 Cohesiveness
-/10 Thematic
-/10 Interaction


-/40 Final Verdict
(+2 Thoughtfulness, +2 Game Fluidity) [+4 bonus total]

The final score and the winner will be taken from whoever has earned the best score. If any tie should occur, then the judges will all agree on a single winner. There will be a single winner, and one runner up.

Creativity: This is how creative the design of the character is, and how creative the actual choice was. While a big name will certainly win you some points for awe factor, a particularly clever choice and design may edge out the victory.

Cohesiveness: This is representative of how well the design fits together, and how well it works with the role and gameplay style you are trying to accomplish. This score will mainly be in relation to a gameplay identity we feel you are trying to give off.

Thematic: These points are mainly for how well the ideas fit with the character. A demon that is a butcher of man would not really be a gentle healer than encourages his allies to do better. Make sure that when creating your character, you will also look towards what they would actually be doing.

Interaction: Interaction is the interaction your character has with allies, and enemies. How the character feels to play with and against is a crucial part of the characterā€™s design, one so crucial it deserves a place in the rubric. Killing your entire team to power yourself may be fun for you, but it would not be fun for your allies, and the character design as a whole would suffer for it. Consider your character in the game, fighting against him and alongside him.


CDC #7 - Calling the Gamechangers

Winner: Kazakus, Leader of the Kabal (Innocence)

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Oh yeah. Had some ideas brewinā€™ in case this was the theme. Good luck, everyone! Iā€™m very much looking forwards to seeing these concepts.

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So are we supposed to make one combined thread or two separate? Also GL HF to you all.

Man this sounds sooooo fun, itā€™s just I kinda have a lot of work to do latelyā€¦ Whenā€™s the last date to opt-in, and how would the process of ā€œpairing upā€ be implemented, random picks, lottery, preference, ā€¦? :slight_smile:

Each member in the partnership will post one half of the concept. Just make sure to let me know which person is your partner!

And, VArsovskiSC, the deadline for submission is the first day of judging, so Saturday the 9th. You are in charge of finding your own partner, which you can do on the announcement thread, or on the Heroes of the Storm concept designer discord, link here: https://discord.gg/6DjWgEv

ā€œBy the Fire i will stand and all my foes will be ash and cindersā€
ā€œYes yes now go on my friends need someone to lead the charge.ā€

Alright letā€™s get to work. Thisā€™ll be so much fun.

Im still available as the last standing partner if you are interested in the contest mate, the other last runner seems to have disappeared from this section of the forums lol.

Sorry for the late reply, been busy with work latelyā€¦ Sure, we can do that, what Iā€™m kinda confused though there doesnā€™t seem to be a way for us to PM each other, thatā€™s kinda crazy :stuck_out_tongue:

Anyways, hope I got some enthusiasm and creativity left so we end up ā€œfinalizingā€ something interesting to the competition

GL HF all :slight_smile:

Some people created a discussion thread on these forums Iā€™m sure you guys could do the same

Welcome to find me here mate https://discord.gg/JTjrNrb , i tried to find a way to copy my own profile there but for some reason ya canā€™t do that unless i just canā€™t find it myself, easier that way to work in private lol.

Behold, the mighty cobbled together at the last minute Rumblefitz!

Also, in case necessary for organization reasons, my partner is Damian who will be posting Rumblefitzā€™s counterpart, Blokk the Ogre.

Heres my side of the Goblin Alchemist duo concept with Nortin, first time i got to use Quotations to make it look neater :smiley: happy about how that turned out

So here is my concept:

Talanji is healer that cooperates with Bwonsamdi (made by Aquatarkus) who focuses more on damage and utility.

He hasnā€™t posted his part by the time Iā€™m posting this but I hope he will in time.

Yeah, about that. You may want to come to our discussion thread. Iā€™m kindaā€¦ stuck.

As I say in the initial part of the thread. My partner is the perfect kind of insane. Canā€™t say I would have come up with this idea myself.

Iā€™d just ike to say My partner Who You Expect is awesome and Iā€™ve been having a blast. Talented designer and able to put up with my crazy nature

Hereā€™s my half of my teamā€™s entry for the contest: <CDC #8>Koralstrasz - Consort of the Queen
Itā€™s a differnt take on Korialstrasz (and Krasus) as they appear on the War of the Ancients.

Hope you like it!

Hereā€™s my entry: <CDC #8> Krasus - Dragon Mage
My Partner is Deefe, with Korialstrasz (or however you spell that :stuck_out_tongue: )

I wanted to come up with a better ā€œtitleā€ for my hero, but my brain is a little dired out right now :expressionless:

Good luck to everyone! :smiley:

Iā€™ve altered my concept a little, replacing his baseline targeted abilities with more host buffs. Hereā€™s a synopsis of what they do.
W: Now applies a damage aura to your host while also granting them a shields equal to the decay of Necrotic Health on targets near them.
E: Generally the same, but know only effects your current host. Can still effect Totem, but only when on Talanji. Becomes targeted when you select dark deal.
I also moved Unwilling Vessel into the talents section with a longer cooldown.
Tell me what you think if I should go through with these changes.
Also I canā€™t use our dicussion thread until you reply in it. Just so you know.

The posts are now out! Any changes to the designs in the last couple days were not considered for the week 1 judgments. If any of you have any questions, please let me know!