After accepting the ‘A Perfect Circle’ quest in the Venthyr covenant campaign, Theotar says ‘…see that our friend’s needs our met.’ -> our instead of are
The 3 piece set bonus text for the Faewoven set says “… in outdoor Shadowland zones.” It should be “… in outdoor Shadowlands (plural) zones.” This error is repeated in the 5 piece set text as well.
NPC: Pelagos
Location: Inside Redelav Hall
Dialogue, second paragraph:
I must admit, I am nervous to be outside of Baston so soon.
It should read, “Bastion”.
Incorrect. The dialogue is fine as currently written.
Random Redelav venthyr gossip text:
I must say I do admire the Countesses strength of conviction, don’t you?
It should read as:
I must say I do admire the Countess’ strength of conviction. Don’t you?
Actually, the dialogue and you are incorrect. Sorry.
The object pronoun (me) should be used here, not the subject pronoun (I). Very common mistake, sadly.
A helpful trick in cases like this is to say the pronoun by itself and see if the sentence makes sense. For example, would you say “Theotar, join I”? Of course not. You would say “Theotar, join me.”
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Into the Flame nightfae covenant campaign quest
“It was he who twisted our rituals and us upon the path of death and domination”
Missing a “put” or similar verb, “and put us upon the path” or “and set us upon the path” etc
quest name: ember court ambassador
typo: “Find someone. Ask them what the want. Give it to them.” in the quest description, should say “they”
NPC: Sabrina
Quest: Say The Magic Words
Typo: “Quest Objectives: Help Sabrina lean 12 new spells in Revendreth.”
Fix: “Quest Objectives: Help Sabrina learn 12 new spells in Revendreth.”
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Date: 12/23/2020
Quest: Just Wing It
Description: In the intro text, there is a typo.
Actual: “…it has became…”
Expected: “…it has become…” or “…it became…”
Reason: Verb tense agreement.
Date: 12/23/2020
Adventure Guide Overview for Artificer Xy’mox
Multiple areas show “womrholes” instead of the correct “workhole” spelling.
When turning in the quest “Disloyalty” (Venthyr campaign), Mikanikos says:
Forsworn defeated? Good. The less of them there are, the happier I am.
It should be “The fewer of them there are…”
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In the debuff tooltip for Caustic Fog, the word “received” is mispelled as “recieved.”
For the Bastion world quest named “History of Corruption”, the quest criterion has the wrong verb tense:
-0/1 Vesper of History rang
It should be “rung”.
Covenant upgrade: The professionals (venthyr).
The Ember Court reaches “it” full potential, and “it’s” weekly parties…
should say “its” in both places, with no apostrophe (not it’s)
In the Adventure Guide entry intro for Huntsman Altimor:
“Margore, Barghast, and Hecutis has been trained…” should be “have been trained…” and “Barghast” should be “Bargast”.
In the “healer” category:
“Crushing Stone inflicts substantial raid damage when Hecutis’ moves.” should be “damage when Hecutis moves.” No apostrophe.
In the “damage dealers” category:
“Utilizie” should be “Utilize” and “Destablize” should be “Destabilize”.
In the “tanks” category:
“Phsyical” should be “Physical” and “[Rip Soul” is missing its closing bracket (should be “[Rip Soul]”.)
Under “Petrifying Howl”:
“…and create a patch of Stone Shards…” should be “…and creating a patch of Stone Shards…”
In the Adventure Guide for Hungering Destroyer:
In the “Overview” category:
“…the Hungering Destroyer casts [Consumes] attempting…” should be “[Consume]” (singular to match the name of the spell.)
Ascended Crafting Item: Calloused Bone
Description: ‘These bones have weathered being beaten and battered over time with due to weather and general use. It is easy to tell that they are collected from creature with exposed bone in Maldraxxus.’
I believe there is a missing word in the first sentence of the description and the word creature may need to be pluralized.
The “Weapon Enchantments” category heading in the Shadowlands Enchanting section of the Enchanting profession screen is misspelled as “Weapon Echantments.”
Bastion quest named “How to Become Forsworn”. Initial quest text, third paragraph:
A small groups of aspirants are removing…
Should be “small group” (singular).
World Quest: Limbo
Location: Temple of Humility, Bastion
Typo: (During one of the “souls assessed” challenges, the soul, Valiant Sentry, says “I hear the dreaded call of the val’kyr. Please! Let me rest in peace! I beg of you!” If you incorrectly select “Pass to Shadowlands”, Watcher Jacintha says the following:) “Though the val’kyr not our true kin, their call back to the mortal plane must be honored.”
Fix: “Though the val’kyr are not our true kin, their call back to the mortal plane must be honored.”
(The “not” should be “are not”.)