I found a typo in the quest text of An Infusion of Materials given by Keeper Tyr in Tyrhold, the typo is the repeat of the word “the” which look like this “with the the necessary materials”.
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In the Adventure Guide for The Azure Vault, the description for the boss Telash Greywing references the “Arcane Vault”. Maybe there’s an Arcane Vault somewhere within the Azure Vault, but I couldn’t find any reference to one - I believe this is an error.
Also, in the description of Umbrelskul, his name is misspelled as “Umbreskul”.
The Forbidden Reach
-In “Mercy First”, the Healing Wing’s extra dialogue misses a “like”: “Well, that does sound exactly the kind of order we would get from Viridia.”
The Waking Shores
-One line of extra dialogue that Forgemaster Bazentus can offer is “I will be ready to assist you should you with to use it to craft new armor…”. While I understand what it’s trying to convey, the wording technically doesn’t make sense and could be shifted in a couple of different ways.
Ohn’ahran Plains
-The quest “Second Challenge of Tyr: Might” (which is part of a questline which starts in Valdrakken) is missing an “an” or “the” before the word “inscription”: “As you approach, inscription on the statue lights up…”.
Azure Span
-A lot of the Nesingwary quests are strange. Despite being given by Hemet Nesingwary, the ways in which Hemet Nesingwary Jr (the NPC you turn the quests into) speaks makes it sound like he’s supposed to be Hemet Nesingwary Sr. For example, the In Progress text for “The Face of Death” makes Jr. sound like he fears Frostjaw coming after him, but it’s Sr. who “invokes” Frostjaw’s wrath by speaking his name aloud. Several of these quests In Progress and Completion text boxes have this sort of problem.
-Tavio’s In Progress text box for “Iskaaran Fishing Net” lacks a “the” when she says “I need strongest vines of kelp…”
-Steria Duskgrove’s non-quest conversational dialogue when you first meet her lacks a “be”: “this could important to our research.”
-Grammatical mistake in the quest “Waste Water Cleanup”. Detry Hornswald says “But with the elementals running amok around here has made it very difficult to gain even a toehold.” Should probably either add a comma and “it” after “here” or remove the “with” in the beginning of the sentence.
-In the quest “Dwarven Antifreeze,” the description for the item “Flask of Dwarven Antifreeze” lacks an “r” in the word “strong”: “Stong stuff.”
-There are several errors associated with Old Grimtusk in the Azure Span. In “True Survivors,” he says “I know we’re pretty banged up, we can’t forget why we’re here.” This is missing a “but.” In “No Vengeance on an Empty Stomach” Old Grimtusk adds an unnecessary “the” when he says “That the gnoll Frostbite?” In his speech during this same quest, his final line is “Frostbite needs to be taken down for the safety all tuskarrs” but it should be the “safety OF all tuskarrs.” There’s a couple problems with the quest dialogue for “Loose Ends.” Firstly, there’s Old Grimtusk’s first paragraph: “If there’s anything I learned from my time out in the wilderness, it’s that if you don’t deal with an evil when you find it. If you don’t break its bones and dig up its roots, it’ll just keep growing.” It feels like there could be a hyphen used here; otherwise, the first sentence sounds like an incomplete thought. The second problem is when he says “…we’re the only one who can right that mistake now”—“one” should be plural here.
Thaldraszus
-In “The Awaited Egg-splosion,” Harleen Chirpsnide adds an unnecessary “A” when she says “With a some necessary adjustments…”
-In the dialogue interaction with Basilton in “Carry On, Basilton,” the one option you’re given uses the wrong word: “Basilton looks up and you…”. The “and” should be an “at.”
-One of Zuttiki’s non-quest dialogue has her say “My job is to oversee everything even an assault.” There should probably be some punctuation here like a comma or hyphen.
-In the quest “Report on the Rebels” Investigator Emma’s missing a “we” or “you” when she says “I am impressed with what have accomplished today.”
-In the Halls of Infusion quest given by Watcher Koranos–“Halls of Infusion: Entropy to Order”–Koranos adds an unnecessary “the”: “…you must put an end to any Primalist threat within the those sacred halls…”.
Found a typo as well. Searched, and didn’t see it reported.
In the quest “Out of the Blue”, the NPC’s name is typo’d. Initial text says:
“Locate Harleen Chripsnide in the Bluefeather Cliffs.”
After I found the NPC, I noticed that her name was indeed typo’d and she is actually Harleen Chirpsnide.
I’ve seen a lot more typos and grammatical errors in this xpac than I have in the past. Makes things feel a bit unfinished.
-T.
Quest: The Cold Does Bother Them, Actually (Tailoring weekly)
Quest text says to craft 2 Explorer’s Cloth Robes. The item is called Surveyor’s Cloth Robe.
Quest: In Tyr’s Footsteps: The Waking Shores
Description text, first paragraph:
You have proven yourself well so far, and though I have great faith you you are worthy of the Engine I still must challenge you as is my designation.
The extra “you” shouldn’t be there.
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Second paragraph of the description section:
Go to the Waking Shores and find my statue and you shall receive further instructions.
Nothing necessarily wrong per se, but in my opinion it could have been written better. My suggestion would be to rearrange the wording, like so:
Find my statue in the Waking Shores and you shall receive further instructions.
Quest: Third Challenge of Tyr: Persistence
In-progress text:
<As you approach, you can feel the warmth of Titan’s energy flowing through the statue once more.>
It should be “Titan”.
Item: Broken Part: Arm
ID#: 198983
Flavor text:
Even after being cut down from the statue, Watcher’s arm still holds onto the hammer.
There is a missing “the” between “statue” and “Watcher’s”.
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Item: Broken Part: Shattered Orb
ID#: 198984
Flavor text:
Shattered into pieces, orb’s once brilliant light seems to be gone forever.
This also is missing “the”, which should be inserted between “pieces” and “orb’s”.
In the Toy Box, the Blue-Covered Beanbag is showing Renown 22. This should be Renown 23.
The toy box also shows 2 Tuskarr Sled toys at renown 25, but this should be renown 26.
Just a few typos found while questing…
NPC Siaszerathel in Thaldreaszus - quest turn in for ‘Haven’t For Time for the Pain’ - text reads ‘Were you able to find the them?” - extra word ‘the’
NPC Siaszerathel in Thaldreaszus - quest turn in for ‘Time is Running Out’ - text reads ‘…and the Timewalkers have extra some extra energy.’ - extra word ‘extra’
NPC Siaszerathel in Thaldreaszus - after accepting the quest ‘If We COuld Turn Back Time’ - general chat text when out in the field closing 2nd time rift read ‘ Ready to watch future master Timewalker in action?’ - missing the word ‘a’ after watch
NPC Chromie in Thaldreaszus - general chat when asking the question ‘What is the Bronze Oathstone?’ - text reads ‘The Bronze Oathstone symbolizes the true calling of bronze flight to protect….’ - missing word ‘the’ after ‘calling of’
NPC Nozdormu in Thaldreaszus - quest ‘Temporal Two-ing’ text in the Quest Objective reads - “Use Chrono Crystal on Eternus and Chromie….” - missing the word ‘the’ after ‘Use’
NPC Kemora in Valdrakken - the quest ‘Preserving the Past: Algeth’ar Academy’ - 2nd paragraph “It has been quite awhile since…” should be ‘a while’ - two words not one
NPC Investigator Erima - in Thaldreaszus - quest text ‘Report on the Rebels” - first sentence reads ‘I am impressed with what have accomplished……’ - missing word ‘you’ after what
NPC Waywatcher Nori in Thaldreaszus - general chat text after healing her - last sentence reads ‘I owe you thanks on both ends, then - from myself, and from my sister.’ - comma after ‘both ends’ isn’t needed
NPC Alexstrasza in Thaldreaszus - in quest ‘Aspect Power’ - in the quest text, 2nd paragraph - ‘Though we are unsure the outcome, if this has the……’ - missing the word ‘of’ after unsure
NPC called Model in Algeth’ar Academy - missing skin, boobs are out, not finished or bugged??
NPC Rethelshi in Valdraken - quest “Storm Surge” - 3rd paragraph missing capitalisation of the word ‘overflow’ when talking about Elemental Overflow.
Jewelcrafting Specialization for Enterprising, the 15 point perk.
“Learn how to make Empty Soul Cage which can is used with the Engineer crafted…”
All of the Dragon Banner Toys for Valdrakken rep show renown 26 in the toy box but should be 27.
During the quest Underwater Menace, Cautious Fisher at the Tyrhold Fishing Hole in Thaldraszus has a typo and a missing word in their dialogue.
In the quest text to accept the quest there is a typo in the third sentence and a missing word in the last sentence:
- “A huge, armored, hugry[sic] beast!”
- “If you want, you can likely lure [it] out…”
Quest: Afront 'Till A Salt
The “is” should be removed.
This [is] will go a long way in helping us in these parts. We just might let your friends stick around…
Achievement: Friends with Sebellian
Text Says: Reach Friend reputation with Sebellian
Text Should Say: Reach True Friend reputation with Sebllian
Blade of Blazing Torment
Equip: Your melee attacks and abilities haave a chance to apply Blazing Torment to your target, dealing 2,344 Fire damage over 6 sec.
Should be ‘have’.
Mistake in initial gossip of Steria Duskgrove at Northern Frostlands, last line
Original quote:
Greetings, friend. This slyvern is in dire need of our aid.
She has clear symptoms of arcane poisoning and barely has enough strength to stand much less hunt or fly.
At this rate, she may starve to death…
Callisto wants to leave her… but this could important to our research. And it’s important to me…
Correction: could be important
When you’re accepting your task during the community feast, you say “Yes Chef!” when you should be saying “Yes, Chef!”
weapon “Blade of Blazing Torment” description " Equip: [Your melee attacks and abilities haave a chance to apply Blazing Torment to your target, dealing 1857 Fire damage over 6 sec." the error is “haave” should be “have”
Quest: A Gift of Secrets
ID#: 72297, 72314, 72315, 72316, 72317
Completion text, first paragraph:
(Name), the heart of a centaur beasts within you… and you have shown greater dedication to your craft than we could ever have imagined.
It should be “beats”.
Quest: Fourth Challenge of Tyr: Resourcefulness
ID#: 70881
Quest description, first paragraph:
All it requires now is power core to process any essence put into it more efficiently.
There should be an “a” between “is” and “power”.
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Question completion, first paragraph:
By his power core we may power the engine and part of him shall always live on as creation of Tyr.
I suggest the following instead:
With his power core, we may power the engine and part of him shall always live on as a creation of Tyr.