Achievement: “Horrific Vision of Orgimmar”
Quest: “Pet Battle Challenge: Blackrock Depths”
Objectives:
Ask Burt Macklyn to open the Stratholme service entrance.
I’m not sure if the entire sentence itself needs rewriting, but I definitely know I’m not entering the Stratholme pet dungeon.
Item: Concentrated Royal Jelly
Flavor text:
Used by the Vil’thik mantid to accellerate the growth of their young.
It should be accelerate.
On the quest “A Small Team”, Sapphronetta Flivvers says this when you click “Tea?” as a chat option:
Blockquote The taste of the tea, pairs perfectly with the energetic and lively nature of the Azerite ore.
There should be no comma there.
On Volatile Worldvein Rank 1 under Worldvein Resonance:
“… and incease the primary stat gained from …”
Should be increase
Apologies for being somewhat off-topic, but why is this not stickied?
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We have no ability to sticky threads ourselves and this is not one of the only three subforums that have any moderation (GD, CS and TS).
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Quest: My Own Drone
Completion text, last paragraph:
And do visit once and awhile.
It should read, “And do visit once in awhile.”
For the “Moosebone Fish-Hook” Highmountain Tauren item, the description describes moosebone as “solid enough carve a barb into”. I imagine that should be “solid enough to carve a barb into”.
Quest Name: “Changing Tides”
Zone: Nazjatar
Questgiver: Jaina Proudmoore
Typo: “We are out of time. We must gain control the Tidestone…”
There should be an “of” between “control” and “the”.
Battle Pet: Zephyrian Prince.
The flavour text for this pet has the typo “diety” instead of “deity”.
Quest: Battle Tested
Zone: Mechagon
Grammatical Errors:
“A weapon like this could really turn the tide against King Mechagons Troops.”
“Take out King Mechagon’s Sentries wherever you can find them”
“Eliminate 10 Upgraded, Anodized, or Corroded Sentry wherever you find them.”
Corrections: First of all, there should be an apostrophe in “Mechagon’s” in the first quotation. Also, “Troops” should not be capitalized. In addition, there should be a period in the second quotation after “them”. Lastly, “Sentry” in the last quotation should be “Sentries”.
Yikes.
Quest: Supplies from the Rajani
Completion text, second paragraph:
We shall endeavor to assist you in any way we can for now take these supplies to assist you in the continuing battle.
Been awhile since I last saw a run-on sentence.
Zone: Mechagon
Quest: Better… Stronger… Less Dead
Grammatical Error:
“There are a few residual creations wandering Mechagon. Refusing to accept King Mechagon’s dethroning.”
Fix: “…wandering Mechagon, refusing to accept…”
Hello. Not a huge one but when speaking to Ka’alu she says, “[…] my flock? it is […]” So the “i” for “it” should be capitalized since it’s the start of a new sentence. (This is for the quest “On Ebon Wings” in Spires of Arak where you need her to fly you by selecting the “I am ready to fly, Ka’alu” option.)
Quest 54231, “Outpost Upgrade: The Great Seal”:
Travel to The Great Seal and see that the troops quality of work is up to our standard.
“Troops’,” plural possessive. It’s particularly egregious to have the writer make an error in a sentence about having high standards!
Vulpera quest #53891 “No Problem Too Small” has a typo in the quest text. In the first sentence, “These problems might seem small, but they will eat away at the Horde overtime if they remain unaddressed,” overtime should be two words “over time”.
Quest: Forbidden Rites (quest=50608)
…sewing the seeds of their dark masters with us none the wiser
Should be “sowing.”
Match the Match - H’Partho Ardoros, Ramhaken, Uldum:
“Investigate 7 Voudtouched Eggs” instead of Voidtouched.
Spell (#308858): Anima
Tooltip:
3% of your maximum health as Shadowstrike damage every1 sec.
Resource generation increased by 50%.
There is a missing space.