Caram comic #130: Stay awhile Santa

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My Comic AMA:

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Moments before disaster caught on video.

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Q: milk
W: cookiejar
E: xmas lights forming a tree
(lo)R(enado): present-tornado

For years I want a horadric cookiejar!

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This has to be the Christmas edition of the level 20 Upgrade to Lorenado

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Wreckard Cain

Ultimate: Lorenado changed to Giftnado.

  • Giftnado: Spread the joy disappointment of Christmas all throughout Heroes of the Storm.
  • Cooldown reduced to 0 seconds down from 40 seconds.
  • Damage type changed to Despair.
  • Despair causes damage to ones soul depending on their mental/emotional fortitude.
Small Critique for Kara

The last panel is clever but at the cost of readability and making the punchline suffer.

People read comics from top to bottom for the most part unless there are specific instructions on the page on how to read the panel. You already have this idea down. The last panel was a special case.
In this case you would want to put Deckards “In that case…” bubble somewhere above the “What presents?” bubble and

  • make the arrow point off screen (either top or sides, depending on the order of speech and location)
  • or make the arrow point towards the inside of the bubble
  • or have no arrow (thanks to you color coding the bubbles to match the speaker).

Side note: The arrow point doesn’t have to be so close to the speaker, as long as it makes sense to the reader they are the one speaking. This can create more space for art and not have the arrow cover the art.

Hope this helps.

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Yea, I know that was a mistake for readability. But thanks for the critique! Appreciated <3

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Well, they are already allwearing those christmas skins that i can´t stand, so desaster is already depicted right there for me.

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