[Prompt] Musical Inspiration

A fun little prompt this time. You, writer, what is the last song you have listened to? Write a short story about your character tied to that song, whether it is tied to the deeper meaning or emotions of the song. If it has lyrics, utilize them if you see fit to do so.


This is meant to be a fun exercise, so there aren’t many rules. I ask that posts be limited to two or three, as much longer is more like a short tale probably befitting its own thread.

Prompts are fun little things meant to inspire. You don’t have to perfectly match the prompt. Just let it inspire a thought.

I’m going to try and post these weekly, sometime between Saturday and Monday probably. Feedback and prompt ideas are welcome, so feel free to post them in here as well. Some prompts will be more thought provoking, some more whimsical. Respect your fellow writers.

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I like the way Kurt Cobain is singing “Smile On Your Brother.” in a mocking way, like how peace could be so easy if everyone did that. There’s a ridiculousness to asking everyone to be nice to everyone, like that would bring some kind of peace, it is kind of funny. I thought that that was kind of interesting.

The repeated lyric, “Gotta find a way. To find a way. When I’m there.” Feels more like the determinism one would do to bring peace. Like what she tries to do what she can do when she’s in the moment. I’ve written about Perfectia Dawnlight being on the other side more than once. But she’s a blood elf, “When I was an alien. Cultures weren’t opinions.”

It kinda comes what people think about you before they meet you. Something you don’t really have any control over.

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Raya sighed, her birthday had been taxing, and… fun. She found herself smiling as her mind recounted the events of the day while trying to remember the last time she had done something so pointless, simply for the fun of it. Despite her “forced” enjoyment of the day, the song from the morning had been at the back of her mind through it all. With the day coming to an end, and having banished everyone from her house. She sat once more at the piano, finally alone.

Gently she lifted the cover from the keys and started to play. Her bandaged hands moved stiffly across the keys while her eyes remained fixed on the score. Slow notes washed over the parlor and through the halls. Though the tune was simple; her play was rigid, mechanical… hollow.

She made it several bars before a mistake made her stop. She glared a the sheet music, debating throwing it against the wall, before moving to continue. “No” She paused. “This wasn’t how we played…” Closing her eyes she took a deep breath, set her hands again and started over.

A single mournful note drew the memory forth from so long ago. She held the key, letting it reverberate alone, painting her imagination with colors that swirled like an oil painting. As the echos began to die another sorrowful note came. Soft forms took shape from the shifting colors; a stage took shape, red curtains on either side. Sconces along the edge brightening the stage while shrouding the audience in blackness. Another note, and she was there, a teenager before the piano.

A chord set the images in motion; her younger self shifting from note to note without truly moving, as though each was an image in a slow projector. A pattern emerged, two somber notes followed by a joyful chord, then two joyful notes and a somber chord. A slow three step dance along the range of keys that promised balance, even if the bad sometimes outweighed the good.

When she heard the violin; a swirl of white, brown, and peach, took form as a figure, sitting atop the piano. Violin already to her cheek, her sister began to play, the only thing moving normally in the scene of shifting images. The bow arced across the strings issuing slow swells that mirrored the notes her younger self played, Raya found she had been humming the part without thinking.

They played off each-other, one moving in the foreground the other changing from one position to the next In the background, then swapping as the piece changed the focus. Hope and despair, joy and sorrow, each balanced by one player or the other.

As the piece ended, with only echoes to fuel them, the colors began to fade. She watched both figures stand and bow to the applause before disappearing to the darkness.

Raya opened her eyes and took her hands from the keys. She smiled thoughtfully as tears of nostalgia ran slowly down her cheek. Collecting herself, she wiped the tears from her face. “Shall we play another?” She asked the memory of one who was no-longer here, before setting her hands on the keys again and closing her eyes.

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Her every stroke entranced me to the graceful way she created. Each movement, each placement, calculated yet divine. I could not draw my eyes away, despite my plagued mind.

She looked up over the canvas more than once, unaware that my gaze was fixed solely on her. To her view, I simply stared ahead blankly. But I was mesmerized.

I sat exposed before her, every scar, every blemish in the open. All could see my corruption, my decisions. All could judge. Yet she did not. She simply worked away as my pale green markings glowed a faint light in the room, with a slight hint of the nightmare’s red.

She sighed every now and again, but did not speak. I knew the sigh’s meaning. In her mind’s eye, she saw perfection, a masterpiece, a timeline of her painting it. Yet here and now her body failed her and a flaw would be born. None would know the flaws save her, but that bothered her greatly.

She dipped the brush again to set to work, but paused. “Tink? You okay?” Her melodic haunted voice broke the sombering silence.

“Fine, why?” I chuckled as a response, my runes burning brighter with my more active mind, as the demonic desires began to try and take hold. I repressed them, as tempting and hungering as the whispers were.

“Shocked you’ve sat still for so long.” Her reply sounded almost empty, a lie told. She knew which thread of time we walked, which ribbon this was. She saw them all, from the ribbon with the perfect masterpiece to one where I just bounded around the room.

The twisted hunger gnawed at my stomach and I found my mind wondering what her divine soul would taste like. I suppressed the curiosity, yet another took its place. Surely she could see a timeline of me betraying her. Of losing myself to the demon within, to the nightmare’s corruption. Why did she keep me so close? Here I was, armorless and weaponless. She could kill me now, yet she chooses not to.

I shook my head and returned to my pose. As I did, a faint red glow shone under the bark of my left chest and upper arm. The green runes on my body blazed brighter. The demon did not wish to lose her prize. Not now. I smirked. My idea had worked to slow the nightmare for now.

“I simply enjoy the moment.” I finally responded to her remark.

She shrugged and stroked the canvas once again.

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