[Prompt] Burning Home

Whether it is the burning of Teldrassil or a freak fire accident, you awaken in nothing but your underclothes to the smell of smoke and fire. After ensuring your family and pets are safe, you have enough time to save 1 item from your home before it is lost to fire forever. What item do you save? Why do you save it?


This is meant to be a fun exercise, so there aren’t many rules.

Prompts are fun little things meant to inspire. You don’t have to perfectly match the prompt. Just let it inspire a thought.

I’m going to try and post these weekly, sometime between Saturday and Monday probably. Feedback and prompt ideas are welcome, so feel free to post them in the archive thread. Some prompts will be more thought provoking, some more whimsical. Respect your fellow writers.

Disclaimer: I cannot take full credit for every prompt. Some of these I create on my own, some are prompts I’ve seen that I’ve taken a WoW spin to, and some I’ve seen and used in the past, some are ideas spoken in passing between me and coworkers, or guildmates, or some are offered directly from folks on the forums. If I’ve been directly given a prompt from another person, I will credit them unless they do not want to. Otherwise, know some of these are gained through many means.


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The taskmaster’s head struck the mine floor in a shower of his own teeth. A downward swing of a mining pick kept him from rising. Dhormir cleared the body and stopped only long enough to wrench the pick free of its morbid sheathe before he ran further into the labyrinthine tunnels. Even those few seconds represented unaffordable luxury.

The upper levels of Blackrock Mountain raged with rebellion and war. Queen-Regent Moira led armed uprising against the minions of Ragnaros to reclaim freedom for the Dark Iron. Word trickled through the cracks of the mountain with promise that any who aided her cause would be rewarded, be they slave or nobility. The slave-miners fought their way to the upper reaches, clashing against armored taskmasters and fire elementals, with aching muscles drunk on vengeance and a deeper need to escape the lava flows overtaking the lower tunnels.

The Firelord would see the whole mountain consumed than to see it taken.

Dhormir Ironmantle rushed into the flaming bowels of the mountain while his kin fought upward. This left him with only a bare token of resistance, but the ravenous magma flows crept ever onward. Time, not the taskmasters, posed the larger threat. Still, he rushed on. Behind him, blood-specked footprints on the mine floor marked the long strides of his passing. Blisters wept through clenched fists and ached against loose rocks on the mine floor, but the dwarf long ago accustomed himself to pushing through the pain. Those who did not fed the core hounds.

There were things more important than freedom, victory, or pain. Some types of vengeance required more than a Queen-Regent’s vague promises.

He knew the path like a lover’s curves. The memory of it rested in his mind as deeply and steadfast as the mountain into which he’d carved. Beads of sweat trickled through the dust and blood covering his face. A distant glow from the tunnel ahead warned of molten death. Dhormir suddenly turned off from the main tunnel, but the ravenous heat followed at his heels. Two more turns, with tunnels growing rougher and shorter. By the time he reached the small room, Dhormir raced on hands and knees.

The pitiful nature of the place belied the years of digging to carve it; years of sneaking away with discarded picks, little better than nubs, to sacrifice sleep for memory and hatred. Barely enough for three dwarves to fit, and only if they knew each other well. The ceiling was low, and bit deeply into forgetful shoulders. Yet, nowhere in the whole of the mountain held as much importance to Dhormir as that tiny room. If he died in the attempt, he could go to his ancestors knowing he died well.

Calloused hands struck a match. Even as precious as oxygen could be so far underground, he wanted to see it one last time.

The whole of the room lay covered in runic script. Painstakingly carved in letters nearly too small to read by sight, each wall, the ceiling, and floor held not a single unused inch of rock. The story of his family, the lives of his ancestors, laid out from the beginning of their scrolls to the modern day–or, at least, what he knew since being chained. While his father, mother, and sister yet lived, he took every story told and recorded it in this dark place. The records of their libraries were burned when the plans of rebellion were discovered. Dhormir refused to allow his family’s history to be lost to the ages but, despite his best intention, it now seemed it would be lost to the lava flows. He scanned the record, trying to commit to memory what he could.

Important as the stories were, they were not why he returned while others fled.

In the back of the room, kept in clay vases hidden within recesses carved into large rocks, lay the precious few family records he knew to exist. Paid for by heavy bribes and heavier shame, he’d managed to smuggle them, parchment by parchment, into the bowels of the mines. Some were lost in the attempt, and the aching voids they left would never know peace nor rest. The names of his father, his father’s father, going back to the very founding of the Ironmantle name, scratched to parchment by hands untouched by a mining pick in generations. The family became soft. The whole of the Dark Iron became soft. But the fiery coming of Ragnaros offered a single blessing; they were soft no longer.

The clay vessel scratched against the floor as he pushed it aside. Behind it, lay the true prize.

Dhormir lifted the lid to find not the records of his family line, but the records of an off-shoot of cousins and aunts and uncles belonging to the Steelmantles. They, along with the Ironmantles and a dozen other families, met in secret so many years passed to plot the end of the Firelord. Months of planning, promises, secret dealings, and blood oaths laid the foundation for rebellion. The old ways of the family were found, giving hope and strength to those who neglected forgotten rituals. Dhormir became the first to don the Iron Mantle since his great-grandfather. A cloak of iron rings, heated to piercing white, placed upon his shoulders and requiring ten paces be taken before its removal. The brand marked him still, though blemished by the cruelty of whips and the anger of knives. Even if they lost, the Ironmantle name would be reborn in fiery fury for the briefest moments before being snuffed out forever.

The chance to lose never came. The Steelmantles, surrendering to second thoughts, betrayed them to the Firelord. They received all the family properties, money, records, and artifacts in reward for their betrayal. The rest, unrepentant or otherwise, were put down in the Ring of Law, fed to core hounds, tossed into lava flows, or banished to the mines in chains. Their faces visited Dhormir in his dreams, watching as they signed treatises and took ownership of that for which they would not fight, while his family were dragged through the streets of Shadowforge. But, faces were not enough. He needed names of those who grew fat on the Firelord’s teat.

He picked up the vase and cradled it in his arm like a newborn babe. A brief glance he offered to the vase which contained the history of his family. He could carry both, potentially, but that would require he leave the mining pick behind. Crude as a weapon it was, a crude weapon is better than none. So much would be sacrificed if he did not bring it with him, yet all would be lost if he stumbled across one of the patrols. Dhormir bit a thumb and rubbed it against the side of the vase, until the crest of his family peeked through the years of dust and grime. His cracked thumbnail traced the outline, blood seeping and mingling into the rock. Then, with a gaze elsewhere directed, Dhormir Ironmantle shook out the match and left the room for the final time. He took the mining pick with him.

The Ironmantle name would be lost to flame, he accepted, but the Steelmantles would be lost to fury.

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(Sub lapsed but since I’m back briefly for the anniversary event get to do the best part of having the sub! Post stories!)

Kyo’s heart pounded in her chest and her lungs strained for air, her legs pumped frantically beneath her. She ran through the streets darting between, and sometimes pushing over onlookers caught off-guard by the blood covered woman madly running past them.

They had betrayed her… returning to the Syndicate onsen with her assignment complete she had overheard them talking about her. She had listened at the door as they discussed their suspicions about her, and how they planned to frame her.

Surprised and overwhelmed by the betrayal of those she thought of as family, she had lingered and been seen. What followed was a blur of broken objects, broken people and blood as she barely managed to fight her way out and flee. Now she was running home to grab her things and leave.

Blocks from her house the adrenaline was wearing off, she was gasping for air and the muscles in her legs were burning. Rounding the corner onto her street she had planned to catch her breath but as her house came into view, she spotted a pair of her former associates standing outside, in the process of lighting a firebomb.

With a new surge of adrenaline, she charged them, but made it only halfway before she saw the flaming device arc through the air and into a window. Horrified, but with no time to slow down she aimed for the closer of the two as they began to turn towards the sound of her running. Against the protest from her legs she jumped, her feet landing on his face and chest, sending him flying backwards and onto the ground from the force of her kick.

She landed, standing atop him, grinding his body along the ground leaving a red smear in the dirt as she surfed him until he came to a halt. She rolled both to, avoid the other persons retaliatory strike, and to maintain her momentum as she darted into her home.

Inside, the flames were already climbing the walls, and the smoke was starting to pool near the ceiling. Covering her mouth, she made her way quickly through the house to her room. Inside, everything had been thrown about, likely as they ransacked the house for valuables before deciding to set it ablaze. Frantically she threw furniture and items out of the way, hoping that they had not found the hidden floorboard.

Beneath several torn tapestries she found the hidden panel in the floor. Though it appeared undisturbed, the switch had been damaged by a carelessly thrown table. With the flames climbing higher, she madly clawed at the floor trying to tear it open. Finally, with her fingers bloody, she found purchase and pulled with all her might. With a crack the floorboard split, and there sitting peacefully inside the hole was a small bag. Quickly she pulled it out, her bloody fingers fumbling with the knot. Despite the encroaching flames, she had to be sure, she was not leaving without it.

When the knot came loose, she upended the bag and to her relief what she was looking for fell into her palm. It was a stone the size of a large coin, with pinpoints of blue and white light that danced across its night-blue surface.

Without wasting another second she closed her fist tightly around it and bolted to the nearest window. With a crash and trailing flames, broken glass, and splinters of wood, she dove through landing painfully on the shards. As she staggered carefully to her feet, trying not to lacerate herself any further, the syndicate thug she had left alive spotted her and charged, his wakazashi raised.

Blood dripping from her wounds she asked her body for one last burst of adrenaline, dodging behind him as he slashed where she had been. One hand grabbed the collar of his haori, the other balled into a fist around the stone, impacted the base of his spine forcing him to bend backwards. Collapsing to her knee from exhaustion she pulled him down with her. In the split second his neck landed on her outstretched knee she brought her elbow down with the rest of her strength on his forehead snapping his neck with a loud crack.

A faint white glow flowed from him into her as his body slumped to the ground. Kyo continued to kneel, coughing up smoke and letting his drained KI repair her injuries, it wasn’t much, but would prevent her from dying.

Minor wounds slowly closed with small pops as they expelled pieces of glass and slivers of wood, and more serious ones ceased to bleed. Kyo stood and made her way out of town, leaving behind another seemingly fulfilling life revealed to be only an illusion.

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Smoke filled her lungs. Her vision swam as soon as she woke up and she coughed violently. Her luxurious home was on fire. An accident while her mage Sisters experimented with fireballs, and their cries filled her ears. Calling her name. Ravasha felt like her covers suddenly gained 100 pounds and ripped them off, practically jumping out of bed. She was greeted with a blaze hotter than anything she conjured at school.

Ravasha panicked. She started crying. Her Sisters came into her room and used their magic to part the flames. The fire roared and blazed around them, splintering wood off their home and sending it crashing to the ground, with a shower of sparks. Smoke covered almost everything and choked the lungs, causing gasping and coughing from all three Sin’dorei sisters. Ravasha’s Sisters took her into their arms and ushered her towards her door.

Yet she paused. Something was in her room that she just couldn’t leave behind. She ran back to her dresser and opened several drawers, cursing her bad luck when she wasn’t here to choose an outfit. She left the drawers of fancy finery open and finally found the drawer containing the precious item she wanted so much: It was a lynx collar that she got from her Elder Sister, who had left on a strange quest to find herself a few years ago.

The fire consumed another supporting structure of the household and wood and metal crashed to the ground. Sparks flew everywhere and some settled on Ravasha. She sustained minor burns and her eyes watered from both tears of remembrance and pain. She strapped the lynx collar around her neck and then ran towards her Sisters. The fire hadn’t touched the entire room and she had a clear path to them.

Once everybody was outside they all gathered in front of their home to watch it burn down. They lived in an isolated part of Silvermoon City and the fire brigade was nowhere in sight yet. Ravasha’s Mother and Sisters wept. Ravasha’s father was nowhere to be seen. Another business trip while their manor burned.

Ravasha touched the lynx collar around her neck. Her sister and she shared so many precious memories. Playing with each other in the forest, chasing lynxes to make dinner at home, caring for the family Bloodwing, caring for the Hawkstriders… she couldn’t replace her Older Sister so this memento of the past would have to do.

“Where are we going to go? Our home is gone.” Ravasha, still a young adolescent, said weakly.

“We’re going to stay with some extended family.” Viviaria, Ravasha’s mother said.

“What caused the fire?” Ravasha asked.

“Your sisters were practicing their fireball spells. A foolish move when you’re surrounded by flammable materials. But we needn’t punish anyone. Just take your collar off. A young lady shouldn’t wear such a thing.” Viviaria scolded. Coming over to take it off herself.

Ravasha tried to pull away but her Mother simply grabbed her hand and pulled her gently back. The adult was too strong. Little Ravasha had to let her Mother remove her collar. The woman then handed it back to her roughly.

“Put it away as soon as we get to our temporary new home. Your family is very important. I know why you kept that… thing. But you can never wear it again. I don’t like it.” Viviaria put her hands on her hips and watched her child closely.

“Yes Mother.” Ravasha said shakily. Suppressing her tears.

The family turned and walked away from their former home, reduced to rubble and ashes. The fire brigade was beginning to arrive to put out the blaze. Some of them came over to assess if Ravasha or her family were injured. Seeing no major injuries, they dealt with what burns they had and then sent them on their way.

Ravasha sometimes wished that she would get caught in a fire and burn away. As she walked she continued to hold back tears. She could never wear something that she treasured again? It may seem small to some people. But then again sentiments always did. Ravasha vowed to never be like her parents: One always gone and one that would never leave you alone. She wanted better for her and her Sisters. If she ever saw her Older Sister again.

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My blade. There is no other item my character holds preciously besides her rune axe.
The ghoul is a close second…

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