06/03/2018 09:57 PMPosted by CaileanmorOkie dokie. So I sat down to try and summarize my little warlock's background in a single condenced tale, and I've hit a road block. I thought I'd post it here for all to read and comment, and just maybe I could get an idea as to where and how to take it from here. If Cannibal doesn't mind the comment clutter here then yay!, but otherwise feel free to comment on my story thread. Link below. Critique away!
I guess ill offer some questions to throw at the wall and see what sticks, but some clarification on what has you stuck could do some good.
How does she regain a body? Does the demon lord give her one after discovering the potential powerful servant that resides within? Does the gem break through an accident that allows her soul free to claim another body? Is she released by a well meaning third party?
With her return is she going to come back as some form of demon? Will she be a gnome with enough demonic essence to be reborn like them? If she inhabits a body what kind of body, and is she the sole occupant or is it a body she shares?
Is redemption something she wants now or is it something she comes to want after an event? Is it an event she feels conflicted over, or is it something involving another person? Did she cause the event, or simply witness it? If she occupies the same body as someone else does the other occupant help fuel this move towards "redemption"?