I don’t hate it, but I do have a few criticism of how they implemented it into the story.
For one thing, I think, excluding Light and Void, the chart should be given a quarter turn clockwise so that Order, Light, and Life are at the top and Disorder, Void, and Death are at the bottom. To me, that makes more sense given how each force has been portrayed so far:
Light opposes Void.
Life and Disorder oppose Death and Order.
Disorder and Death oppose the Light.
Order and Life oppose the Void.
I also think they’re being a bit too heavy-handed with the cosmic stuff. Personally, I think it works better in the background rather than being the main focus.