Raamah’s Entries (Part 3)

so, I finished college, and I finally found time to finish part 3 of the Raamah’s Entries that I started 2 months ago.
I know that not many people actually even see those posts,
but those who do, and comment on their opinion,

I want to thank you.
every comment, and only knowledge that you love what I’m trying to create Inlight happiness in my heart (and I Mean it, how stupid and pathetic it sounds)
and inspires me to keep pushing and working on the hero how impossible it feels.

(and most likely won’t truly see the “light” of the game)

please to check the other entries first to get the Idea of the story and the personality of the hero:

Story Discussion Post (will be reposted soon)

Raamah’s Entries (Part 1)

Raamah’s Entries (Part 2)

If you wish to see the "Hero Concept" This is the last "version" and the version that I put most time and mind to it: Hero Concept: Raamah - Abilities, style, lines and etc

Some things have been changed like the passive and the E ability, and some of the "math" too.

But most is pretty much the same.

Have fun!


Raamah’s Entry #216:

I arrived at Watchpoint Gibraltar, In hope to find Winston,

Unfortunately, I can’t find anyone, Winston’s lab is all wreckage, I have found some bodies, the bodies belong Talon’s soldiers.

I will try to access Winston’s computer, the computer is damaged,
but nothing I can’t repair easily.

Huh, I repaired the computer and By the data, that I can find here, Winston is alive, and he connected some of the Overwatch agents and he got a call back from "Lena Oxton" aka Tracer, and it seems he left to meet her,

I got no time to lose, I should leave Winston a Massage that I was here, and how could he connect me if he will come back.

Before I leave I should download the Overwatch agent database and try to find the other living agents before Talon finds them.


Raamah’s Entry #236:

It’s around 2 months now since I left the city.

I found 6 agents, 4 of them didn’t want to reunite with overwatch and the choose to stay low, lucky one of them give me direction how I can find John Francis "Jack" Morrison,

The commander of Overwatch, I believed he died,

Apparently, he wasn’t dead after all.

He told me that he met him a few weeks ago and that John told him that he is going to Mexico,

He said that he had some business to finish there.

Maybe I will have a chance to catch him before I lose track of him.


Raamah’s Entry #240:

the world truly changed since the last time I was down here.

No one seems to know who I am, for now,

It is for the best,

There are Crime and Chaos everywhere…

I knew it was a bad Idea, but I couldn’t just sit back and watch the Innocent suffer once again,

And I got involved, and Now I need to get away from here and fast.


Raamah’s Entry #241:

yesterday I had a dream about Winston,

In the dream…We…we worked on cursing the Omnics form the corruption,

It was so long time ago…

I think I was talking about it in Entry #101

I can’t remember that the Omnic chooses for herself…

But I do remember her, she was the cure.

She brought peace to our world,

ended the war and the crisis.

The True First Omnic.

(Besides ______ of course)

She was what United the world,

And truly created Overwatch.

I wonder what happened to her.

Is she still roaming the world and making it better?

or was she destroyed like everything else…

or captured and shut down…?

Anyway, enough about my rumbling,

there are rumors about a serious fight that happened last night, few cities away, something about someone wiping out the “Los Muertos Gang”, “Dorado”, if I’m not wrong.

if it is who I think, We should be moving before I lose track of him again,

he is my best shot to find the more of Overwatch agents.


Raamah’s Entry #246:

and I was late again,

I lose track of him again,

but I got lucky too,

I stopped in a bakery shop named "Panadería Las Nieblas" for a breakfast.

a young girl by the named Alejandra

told me about the man that she claims that saved her life,

she told me he is known as the "Solder 76" these days.

before I left the shop she asked me to tell him thanks for saving her life.

maybe he isn’t bad as I thought he is.

It’s time to get back to the city and resupply.

I got a message that they got news for me,

Maybe I still got a chance to save to the world after all.





if you liked or disliked the story I’m trying to tell, please comment your opinion, any suggestion could help me make the story better,
I maybe made Raamah first to be my own hero, but now I want him to could become the hero of you all.
what and if he may come to be is up to you,
and with you only, he got a chance.

please,
if you any suggestions, artwork and etc that could help bring Raamah to life, please tweet me here

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Really like this man. You do a real good job on these.

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Sorry for the delay, thanks!
It really warm my heart!
Still working on the concept,
The main problem is that most of the people just Ignore or miss the Post.
And all the hard work is gone like noting.

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Yeah that happens. You get used to it sometimes or you find new ways to share it.