The first thing I do when playing healer is checking to see what the other healer is. In this case it is Ana. Because Ana is another main healer, you can potentially focus on your damage aspect more because Moira can do both easily. Let’s see how this goes.
1:40 Orb gets eaten immediately. Now you know they have a DVA that will eat your orbs. Unfortunately her existence means you will have to alter your play to account for her. Heal orbs will be better until DVA is demeched because DVA players almost never eat heal orbs but they will always eat damage orbs.
2:00 I don’t like how you’re in the middle of your team. You are better off behind your team. That way you will have better vision of your team, your spray will get maximum value, and enemies are still within range of your beam.
2:10 You throw a damage orb. Remember point #1. This is a waste. Because you did this, your Mei dies. 100% your fault here.
2:25 You are in front of your team again. Apparently so you can suck on a barrier which does nothing.
2:31 Your orb is off cooldown. Your team needs healing and your resources are low. You don’t use orb. Your Ana dies. 100% your fault here.
2:35 You decide to ult backed in a corner. Why? You didn’t even throw an orb first.
2:45 You go on a solo Moira flank to throw a damage orb. Why? It takes you 7 seconds to get back to your team. Surprised they aren’t dead yet. Or not… By the time you get there they are all low and end up dying.
3:10 You walk on the middle of the point with 120 HP so you can suck on a barrier again. I am sensing a theme here. You die. Your fault.
3:57 You fade back into spawn to run away from a DVA bomb. Why? It takes you about 7 seconds to walk back into the fight. By then, your Ana is dead. Probably your fault since you are supposed to heal her but you can’t since you’re in spawn.
4:25 You ult without throwing an orb first. It’s also a second after enemy lucio ults. I can see you are trying to use it to secure kills as opposed to healing your team. You won’t get any under this circumstance. How about you wait a few seconds for Lucio ult to wear off first? Your team was not in need of healing anyway.
4:35 You waste away your entire piss meter for no reason.
4:50 Ana needs your healing. You do some very inefficient healing about 5 seconds later. She ends up living, but you wasted a lot of piss meter.
5:02 Wasted orb
5:14 All that wasted piss you’ve been doing is coming back to bite you. Now you have to scramble to try to refill your meter.
5:22 You get frozen by a Mei. You have fade. This should never happen. Somehow you survive with 1 hp. You should be dead. Even after you are 1 hp, you walk back into the middle of the point. You should be dead again.
5:48 Why are you walking into Mei ult with 20 hp? You should be dead again.
6:30 You just wasted about 50% of your piss meter for no reason. There isn’t even a fight happening.
6:44 You see an out of position soldier, you can take this engagement. Instead you fade away from him coz you are scared he is going to 1 tap you or something.
6:55 Why did you fade into the enemy team’s map area to avoid a DVA bomb? You didn’t even look to see where the DVA bomb was. You are lucky there are no enemies after you turned the corner. Moira with no fade = free kill. In fact, you still almost die anyway because you walked back into the fight without your fade.
7:07 Why are you walking forward after you ult? You actually walk right into their Mei. Doomfist saves you. You are lucky. You should be dead.
7:35 Enemy Mei wastes ult. She’s out of position here. For some reason you walk forward again, even into her ult (again).
8:00 I don’t know why you decided to throw a damage orb after enemy Moira ults here. Not only is any damage going to be healed by Moira ult, enemy team still has DVA, and your own team is going to be taking damage.
8:38 I don’t actually know why you ulted here. There is nothing even in front of you?
First half over. This is more than enough feedback to see patterns.
1: You press W too much, even walking into enemy Mei when you out-range her by a long shot.
2: You waste a lot of orbs.
3: You waste a lot of piss. (Poor resource management)
4: Poor ult usage.
5: You fade in wrong directions.
6: I don’t recall ever seeing any AD strafing or crouching.
But overall you mostly stay with your team which is good. Even if your positioning within your team can use work. What rank is this like Gold? I actually don’t know how console ranks look because I don’t play console. But the same principles apply.
The only thing deathmatch will help is your mechanical aim, which Moira doesn’t need a lot of. She needs more game sense and positioning than anything.