I’m actually making this more so to make a public contract to myself but also to share something while making said contract I will sit down and edit this chapter and have the full thing posted by no later then Saturday night this week. Wit hthat said here’s a preview of Chapter 2
Chapter 2
A Teachers Ribbons
NeemaShauku, the art of gravitational dance. Popular among Iresia, a special dance where those partaking quite literally alter their bodies weight and glide upon winds and swing along the thinnest of ribbons. needless to say it is quite the dangerous sport for those performing, requiring both spiritual, mental and physical conditioning, and if one lost their balance while in the air they would drop like a stone.
Exactly like Qhira had done the first time she had actually gone into the air. focusing on her inner self she would become weightless and be blown into the air by a simple fan, but after losing her balance on the wind she panicked and came tumbling back with a painful thud landing on her stomach.
The young teen groaned in pain as she began getting to her feet “Ow…” She mumbles.
“Well, that’s what you get for forgetting lesson 1.” Came the stern voice belonging to a one Waliya, Qhria’s instructor in that sacred art.
“Trust my senses but never let them be overwhelmed.” Qhira said with a nod “Easier said then done Ma’am”
"Of course it is, now shut up and get ready to go again."
It’s moments like this that make me wish the Forums had a middle finger emoji
Unless you have something to say about the actual content beyond “hurr durr fanfiction bad and the fact you feel the need to make it is bad” please buzz off
I don’t have anything against fanfiction as a concept (even though the vast majority of it is), but surely even you must realize just how cringey it is to either write fanfiction about Qhira or post fanfic of (any kind) on the official HotS forums, let alone both.
Bro you spend your free time behind a troll portrait debating balance notes for a game that puts space marines up against orcs and demons.
Im named after a horse in another rpg
Just accept that we’ve hit max cringe and let people enjoy things. I personally do not like fan-fiction but qhira has no backstory. Lets be honest melke’s writing is even better than the writing that went into those comics anyways (devs if you’re reading this art was a 10/10 but lets recognize the plot could have been a bit more coherent).
I’m literally writing this in a series of flashbacks tied in and I’m still confident I’m gonna be more coherent then that comic was, sheesh it was hard to read.
I don’t even need to direct you to the other chapters I just need to direct you to this very thread which is literally a clip of Qhria falling flat on her face
So if you’re not even going to read the damn thing before moaning about cringe then buzz off.
), but surely even you must realize just how cringey it is to either write fanfiction about Qhira or post fanfic of (any kind) on the official HotS forums, let alone both.