Was wondering if my short story here shows any promise.
The orc warlock’s gaze was fixed intently on the impromptu arena before him, where the sound of clashing metal echoed. This was his respite, the time of day he coveted most, not for the battle itself, but for the sight of one particular warrior. The female figure in the center of the melee moved with a grace that belied her strength, her slender form dodging and weaving against the bulkier silhouette of her adversary.
His absorption in her dance of war would be unfortunately shattered by a slap on his back, a blow that might have been mistaken for a cudgel strike. “Still playing the spectator, Warlock?” a mocking voice boomed from above. The Warlock turned, rubbing the sting from his skin, to find a towering orc leering over him, the scent of sweat and Kor’kron leathers heavy in the air. “Perhaps if you summoned creatures greater than rats, you might conjure a companion to tolerate your presence,” the brute jested crudely.
The Warlock’s usual response was to tune out the derision, to return his focus to the arena where dust from the Durotar grounds now clouded the air. Apparently his tormentor agreed, forcing his head around with a grip of iron to witness the ongoing skirmish. “Observe the might of a true warrior,” the tormentor sneered.
Indeed, he observed. Every move she made, every decisive swing of her ax, he noted with a mixture of admiration and something deeper. But the poetics of his thoughts were abruptly cut short by another harsh cuff to the head, a jolting reminder of his place. “She is beyond your reach, Warlock. You, the weakest among us, are no more than a jest here.” the orc jeered, his laughter a grating echo.
The taunting ceased only when his tormentor barked a command, silencing the din of combat. Warriors assembled swiftly, forming a disciplined array before the two seated orcs. “Grashka, your audience has returned” the tormentor said as he hoisted the Warlock to his feet.
Her gaze met his, unwavering and sharp, a piercing contrast to the warmth in his own. Any semblance of hope swiftly curdled into dread beneath her scrutiny. He braced for scorn, for contempt, but her expression yielded no such clues, only the same stern intensity that she bore in battle.
Unable to bear the imagined judgment any longer, he averted his eyes, a sense of utter defeat washing over him. The world seemed to lose its luster, and he was left hollow.
The sergeant’s voice sliced through his reverie, dripping with disdain. “You see, Warlock, you wilt even beneath her stare. You are a failure, as is the lot of your kind.” The push that followed was forceful, sending him to his knees, left to wallow in the dust as the others returned to their training.
So profound was his humiliation that he didn’t notice her parting gesture, a fleeting, curious glance that she afforded him, her composure momentarily slipping, before she rejoined the ranks, her own facade of indifference firmly back in place.