Some spoilers
At the start of War Within, Khadgar sacrifices himself in a poignant moment, giving his life to save Alleria, who takes the story lead over arching story of The War Within. This felt like a powerful and meaningful sacrifice.
We also have the storyline of a character (whose name escapes me) who is nearing death, and we help guide him to his chosen resting place. It’s a strong, emotional moment in the story.
Then we come to Baelgrim, the leader of the Stormward, who sacrifices himself to take out the Nerubian general. This moment, however, felt a bit forced. The idea that there was no other way to set off the barrels of unstable mead seemed a little contrived, and his death didn’t carry the same weight as others.
As for the High Speaker, Eirich, his corruption meant he had to be deposed, which was an appropriate and necessary story beat.
Where I start to feel some dissonance is with the transition of leadership roles. I agree with Brinthe’s elevation to High Speaker. Her story made sense, as she was clearly positioned for such a role but was held back due to her status. Similarly, the Grave Keeper’s apprentice stepping into the role she was training for felt natural and well-earned.
However, the decision to make Lufsela the new leader of the Stormward didn’t sit right with me. Baelgrim’s death seemed unnecessary to bring her into this position, especially since she was a minor quest giver beforehand. There were other characters, like Olbarig, who felt like more logical successors. He had important knowledge about the island where the Stormrooks could be summoned and formed a bond with Baelgrim’s rook. His rise to leadership would have felt more consistent with the story’s progression.
My concern here is not with who leads but with the narrative balance. When several leadership changes happen in quick succession, with many male characters being replaced, it can feel less organic and more like a pattern designed to meet a specific outcome. I think maintaining a balance and ensuring that leadership transitions feel earned by the story, rather than appearing to follow a formula, would result in a more cohesive and satisfying narrative.
These are just my thoughts on how the story could be more balanced in its character arcs and leadership transitions.