[Prompt] Death Wake

Through some trickery, perhaps that of a bronze dragon or even black, an illusion or a dream, or just circumstance, you find yourself standing by as you watch someone with your exact appearance and mannerisms die. As you try to react and reach out, you pass through everything you interact with, like some sort of spirit. A spirit set to watch the wake of their death play out with no ability to act. What do you see? What follows after?


This is meant to be a fun exercise, so there aren’t many rules. I ask that posts be limited to two or three, as much longer is more like a short tale probably befitting its own thread.

Prompts are fun little things meant to inspire. You don’t have to perfectly match the prompt. Just let it inspire a thought.

I’m going to try and post these weekly, sometime between Saturday and Monday probably. Feedback and prompt ideas are welcome, so feel free to post them in here as well. Some prompts will be more thought provoking, some more whimsical. Respect your fellow writers.

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Alanstrois sat atop the tree stump and watched the Spellblades proceed. In their arms was another Alanstrois, bound, gagged, and dressed in rags. The nightborne assassin couldn’t actually tell how many times he’d seen this exact dream before. Only that it never got any less disturbing.

He watched a crier shout some list of inane, trumped up charges, arson (Alanstrois had pyrophobia back then, though he’d since gotten over it), possession of illegal weapons (“no blade longer than 5 inches may be possessed by a civilian” was the law, and his blades were all under the mark), murder (to be fair, he was guilty of that, but they mixed up the victims, right crime, wrong victim), and jaywalking (he has no idea what jaywalking is, but he was always warned he probably had brain damage after what he went through).

He watched as a halberd was lifted up, arcane energy sharpening the blade. Then, after about five more minutes of inane babble, it came down… and a bang from the crowd disrupted the sharpening spell and threw off the executioner’s aim. The front of Alanstrois’ chest was given a deep, sickening gash. His last waking memory was the gentle-looking woman rushing to him. Then, flashes of what he had to assume was the wholly imagined gap-filler the brain liked to produce in the absence of conscious memory. A woman tending to him and experimenting on him, a child sometimes charging in to watch, and then, after twelve hours, she does… something, and it brings him back. It’s borderline necromancy, but he’s no undead, just stiff as hell, missing a good chunk of his memory, and freaking right out due to hunger, thirst, questions, and fears all bombarding him at the same time. And there she is. Gentle, beautiful young lady, patient as can be, ready to nurse him back to health, away from the guards, away from Elisande’s puppets… only for her happy ending to be taken away not even a week later, as the loss of her son forces her to walk into what she knew would be a trap. Only for Alanstrois to look into the cold dead eyes of his savior, and know not how to revive her, as she had done for him.

And then, he wakes, reaching his arm across to the bedside table, pulling his mask down just enough to take a sip of his ale, without exposing his lips to the naked eye. He had come to spend many a morning tipsy, these days.

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((Nice tale, I enjoyed reading it :smiley: ))

Mortre’s breathing grew rapid as her eyes darted behind her two eye lids. She was curled up around Sterixia, sound asleep. Her tail twitched as her mind reacted to the events playing out in her mind.

It was that dream again.

That dream many people have, watching their death, watching the aftermath. Mortre had this dream many times in her extensive lifespan, yet this is the first time since returning to Azeroth.

Traitor! screamed the voices of the unknown people. A large gathering of sword brandishing heroes, ready to take down the dragon before them.

Mortre as a human floated above the scene, separated from her draconic body below. The dragon roared. The fools didn’t understand. They didn’t know. And she was butched while her spirit watched.

Mortre felt anger in her mind as she watched the mortals kill herself below. She tried to cry out, to stop them. She tried to grab hold of them and push them back. But her voice, her body. Neither impacted this world. Her flesh phased right though objects, her voice was silent. All she could do was watch.

The mortals, satisfied with their deed, left the draconic corpse as they wandered away.

Mortre sat in front of her dragon self’s head and pulled her knees to her chest. She stared emptily at her dead self, wondering what happened next.

After what felt like hours, Mortre stood and spun. She heard someone, something approaching. Her heart skipped a beat as a young netherdrake darted out of the forest and ran at her body.

Sterixia stopped suddenly as she approached, and then finished her approach cautiously. Though no words or calls came from her mouth, Mortre could hear the raspy breath of one trying to hold back a wail. Sterixia nudged the dragon’s body, and finally with a look of dejection, just curled up along her chest. No sobs escaped her lips, as no sobs could, but jagged raspy breaths and quivers through her body told a telling tale.

Mortre tried to approach Sterixia. She tried to run her hands down Sterixia’s nose, to comfort the youth like she always had. Yet her hands simply passed through with no effect. She tried to call out Sterixia’s name, but nothing sounded.

Sterixia?

Mortre was shocked to hear someone say Sterixia’s name. She looked around and saw Tolbyas standing there, a dumbfounded look on his face. Oh no! Mortre! Tolbyas ran forward and shook the dragon’s nose. Morty! C’mon! Wake up!

Wake Up!"

Mortre bolted awake with a snarl as she looked frantically around her cavern. Tolbyas was standing a few feet away, in a half crouch like he was ready to jump away. Sterixia yawned a glanced around. As soon as she saw Tolbyas, she hopped up and shifted into her mutated elf form to give him a big hug.

“Tolbyas…” Mortre grumbled as her own form shifted. “What did I tell you about waking me up?”

“You seemed upset with your dream.” Tolbyas chuckled as he patted Sterixia’s head. “Thought I would be nice and wake you up. What was it about?”

Mortre felt herself start to blush and diverted her gaze to the floor.

“Nothing.”

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Myorga was used to having bad dreams, night terrors, and hearing voices in her head day and night. There was a larger and more vicious part of her that yearned to be let out and wreak havoc as far as possible. A larger, furrier part. As a Gilnean, she was accustomed to people assuming she was a worgen, and they would be right, but it wasn’t until recently that she managed to actually contain the curse in her blood. Having a druid take pity on her helped with that.

This dream, however, was special to her because despite its contents, it contained the key to controlling the curse withing her blood


Deep in the Tanaan jungle on the planet of Draenor, a fierce worgen huntress stalked her prey: another worgen who bore her name, appearance, rank, title, and everything else about her. The impostor must die. It was not Myorga’s first assignment taking out targets like this. Impostors had to be eliminated to prevent the Iron Horde from ravaging the Alliance and Horde forces of Azeroth as they, in-turn, tried to prevent the Iron Horde from taking over their own homeworld.

In her dream state, she could not recall who gave her the assignment to eliminate this fiend who has assumed her identity. All she knew was that here and now, she had the perfect vantage point. She was downwind of her target, a small stream nearby concealed any sound of movement, and she had the high ground. She carefully loaded a silver bullet into her rifle, her MO when taking out a target. She controlled her breathing as she lifted the rifle to her shoulder and peered through the scope. Breathe, release, aim, repeat. Get into the pattern. Breathe, release, aim, breathe, release, aim, breathe, release, aim, squeeze.

A single shot roared out of the barrel of her gun. Her target didn’t even have time to look her way before the bullet, to Myorga’s shock and horror, passed through her target’s head and disappeared. Her target sat by the stream, completely unharmed. A chilling growl escaped her throat and she stashed her rifle away and unsheathed her long, sharp claws. Leaping from the tree to the next she quickly closed the distance gap and pounced on her target. She missed by a mile as her claws passed through her target’s neck doing absolutely no harm. She fell to the ground and rolled through the twigs and leaves and finally came to rest by a large rock. She sprang to her feet ready to meet any counter attack.

But her target didn’t move. Or, rather, her target seemed completely unaware that she was even there. Myorga began to feel something was wrong. Dropping all pretenses, she approached her target and took a furious swipe at the impostor. Nothing. She watched as her claws passed through thin air. Another swipe, but less angry and more curious. Finally, she attempted to grab her target and watched in amazement as her hands passed right through and phased into her target’s body.

Myorga pondered this. How could she eliminate a target that she couldn’t even hit, let alone touch and didn’t even seem to know she was there? As she thought about it, a twig snapped behind them. Both she and her target looked in time to see an orc come charging out of the brush, axe drawn and ready to swing.

As she watched, the orc passed through her body and charged at her target. She watched in fascination. A part of her remembered this. She remembered the orc charging and she remembered bringing up her rifle to block the swing. This was where she lost her eye and her orc assassin fell. She remembered it all, but as she watched, her target looked at the orc, smiled, and simply accepted her fate.

She accepted her fate.

The now headless body of her impostor lay lifeless by the stream, blood oozing into the waters and the orc roaring triumphantly.

She accepted her fate.


Myorga startled from her sleep as thunder rolled across the sky. She sat and checked her surroundings. She was safe, at home, in her own bed. She brought a hand up to her face and felt the scar and the empty socket where her eye had been. Most importantly, she felt a human face. She smiled, laid back down, and snuggled under the covers again. It was raining out and she didn’t feel like going out. Loba, her wolf, groaned in his own slumber and as the rain poured down, she drifted off back to sleep.

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Lynara watched the scene it was a surreal sensation. She watched as an outside observer. She couldn’t tell where they were or when this might be.

Lynara set up for the ambush. The Horde patrol would be moving through here anytime now. She and her other sentinels were ready. Her ebony eyes taking in the situation. The horde has a few warriors and a kodo beast to transport the supplies. Reinforcements for them were coming but they would miss the caravan if they waited. Her superior gave the order and they began to unleash death upon the horde forces. Her first arrow caught an unsuspecting troll right in the head. He collapsed without a word. Horde forces were already mobilizing. She took cover from return fire. She saw her commander give the signal to flank, try and get to a new position. She nodded and moved swiftly from tree to tree firing arrows as she did. They had to make it seem like there were more than there were. Force the horde soldiers to stay bunched. Arrows went flying from her bow.

Lynara watched the ambush play out. The horde forces were in disarray from the death of their sergeant. She turned and watched as the horde reinforcements came from behind them. To her horror she realized it was an ambush. They themselves were the ones being ambushed.

A cry of pain caught her attention. Her commander was stabbed through the back by a brown skinned orc female with a spear. More Horde had come already. Her eyes widened as another of their group fell to a magic attack from an arriving mage. It was an ambush to their ambush. The orc finished the wounded commander and began moving towards Lynara.

Lynara tried to cry out to herself as the undead came up behind her.

She turned to see the ugly grin of a forsaken rogue. The steel slipped past her body armor and into her upper chest. She gasped as her mouth was flooded with the coppery taste of her blood. She fell back as the forsaken ripped the knife from her chest.

Blood flowed openly from her wound as the forsaken grasped her leg and began dragging her to the group. She could only watch with blurred vision as her commander and her three sisters were dragged to join her. ‘Where are they?’ She lamented. Their reinforcements should have been here by now. She heard the orc talking to the others before she knelt down next to Lynara. The only one still alive it would seem. She thought for a bitter moment the woman might help her. That thought died almost as quick as it came. The orcish woman took out a dagger and casually dragged it across her throat. Lynara struggled as blood filled her lungs. Then she went still.

Lynara watched tears running from her face. She watched as a forsaken woman went from body to body cleaning their wounds and sowing them shut. A Val’kyr descended from above and began to channel its dark magic into the corpses.

She watched in horror as her own body began to reanimate. Her corpse opened her eyes. The color already fading from her face.

Lynara stood her eyes glowing a deep crimson. Her neck wound and chest wound had been sown shut. Her blood had been cleaned off as well it would seem. “Welcome back to the waking world Dark Ranger.”

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Lightning streaked across the Kul’tiran sky while thunder crashed; the stormclouds above unleasing torrents of rain upon Boralus. “Wind’s howlin’ today,” ventured the bartender, glancing towards one of the windows of the tavern as a particularly strong gust rattled the shutters. The willowy elven death knight at the door offered no response, simply standing in the doorway staring out into the streets.

“Oi! Either close the bloomin’ door or sod off already! What are ya, afraid of a little rain?” snapped the bartender in annoyance. “Hello? Anyone home?”

The words fell on deaf ears though, as the elf continued to stare, transfixed by a particularly large puddle nearby. His expression carried hints of terror, as though some horrible monster lurked in those few inches of water…


Several years prior…

Kirendar Stormsong dashed through the forest, bobbing and weaving his way through the dense trees of the Plaguelands as the angry growls of Scourge forces sounded behind. What had started out as a simple mission to gather intelligence for the Argent Crusade had quickly gone awry–the Scourge in the area much stronger than anticipated. While there were certainly no better scouts than a quel’dorei ranger band, their prowess seemed to have afforded little advantage this time, almost as if the Scourge knew they were coming.

Kirendar swore, pausing a moment to collect his bearings and breath. Indeed, that had been exactly why the Scourge had been able to ferret out his rangers, given the Argent traitor he’d seen in the midst of the Scourge camp. Damn that Stephanov! I should’ve known he would be mixed up in this!

The eerie whinnie of a deathcharger rang out behind, interrupting his musing and prompting the elven ranger to resume his flight through the forest. While he was faster than the ghouls, outrunning a death knight wasn’t likely to happen. Need to hide before they catch up…somewhere they couldn’t find my scent… He crested a hill, skidding to a stop at the edge of a cliff overlooking a tiny lake. Normally, he wouldn’t bat an eye about going for a swim, but the waters of the Plaguelands often carried nasty surprises of their own. The approaching clamour behind him, however, gave him little choice other than to scramble down to the shoreline and paddle into the lake’s midst.

Despite the lake’s small size–hardly bigger than a large pond–the murky water proved to be quite deep and free of lurking monsters. Certainly an ideal spot for him to take cover while the Scourge forces passed by. With luck, they would soon be gone and he would be free to carry his report back to Light’s Hope, informing the command there of the mission’s losses and the traitor in their midst.

Kirendar twitched his ears, listening carefully as he paddled over to a sheltered spot near an overhanging branch and let himself sink low in the water. The sounds of the pursuit grew closer. As the Scourge crested the ridgeline he took a deep breath and ducked beneath the surface.

While the water dulled his senses, his ears were keen enough to catch the muffled rumblings on the surface, providing the bearings that his eyes could not. Seconds ticked by, beginning to feel more like agonizing minutes as he continued to remain submerged, a shiver running up his spine. *The water was colder than I thought…*The silence above suggested that the Scourge had passed him by, though to look would be risky. Despite his good physical condition and experience swimming in the many lakes and streams of Quel’thalas, he could not remain submerged for much longer. Better to risk a small breath now than to–the water!

Kirendar’s eyes flew open. The water had indeed grown colder! He swam towards the surface, a look of horror crossing his face as his fingers brushed solid ice rather than meeting the air. There must have been cryomancers in the bunch! He continued to worm his way along the underside, feeling for any kind of opening and then kicking wildly in a futile attempt to create an opening of his own. No no no, this can’t be happening! Not like this!

His heart pounded against his ribcage; muscles screaming in protest and lungs burning from the exertion. There has to be a way out…there must be a way out… Water flooded his lungs as he was finally forced to exhale, choking and burning with a cold fury as it poured in. Slowly, he ceased struggling, feeling his body begin to sink as his vision darkened.


Kirendar shook his head, clearing the vision from his mind with a shudder as he stepped back into the tavern and closed the door. He had duties to attend to…but they were duties that could wait for another day. Yes…another day…perhaps one without so much water.

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It was beyond Arron why the Alliance was trying so hard to invade Vol’dun. Sure, a foothold in any region of Zandalar would spell bad news for the Horde, but Vol’dun was an arid wasteland of little more than heat, fanatical snake-men, and sand. Lots and lots of sand. Part of Arron felt like just withdrawing and simply giving Vol’dun to the Alliance. They’d savor their victory for all of a few minutes before realizing what a truly terrible place they just purchased for themselves, and their victory would ring hollow. And then their boots would be filled with sand and their throats torn out by snake-men. That would be a delightful thing to see.

But alas, in the grand scheme of things Arron was little more than a grunt, and thus when he was directed to defend Vol’dun with every ounce of his remaining strength he had little recourse but to agree. And so it was that he found himself amongst a company of deathguards and dark rangers, the former providing as much protection as possible for the latter, as they all brawled against a seemingly endless incursion of 7th legionnaires. Behind them stood the Vulpera hideaway; the object of their defense. Perhaps Sylvanas wanted to stay in the good favors of the fox-folk who lived there, though for what purpose Arron couldn’t fathom. His eyes were fixated forward, for somewhere beyond the dunes was Shatterstone Harbor. If the Horde forces could somehow only take that harbor, the Alliance would lose its critical access point into the region.

But for now he was destined to fight a defensive battle, and the notion bothered him at his very core. The desolate dunes of Vol’dun stretched upwards on all sides, obscuring vision in a few crucial areas. It was difficult to determine from which direction the next enemy assault would come, yet the moment he saw a flash of blue armor he would, without fail, let an arrow fly towards the area where the wearer’s head should be. Each time he drew the bowstring taut and let loose another arrow, he counted. He was at seventy-nine shots now, and he had not missed a single one. He was determined not to, after all, for he couldn’t allow himself to make a single mistake. Not again.

Monotony began to sit in, but with monotony came complacency, and complacency was the enemy. He needed to fend it off; they weren’t getting anywhere just by standing like this out in the open. The push towards the harbor needed to come sooner rather than later.

To his left Arron saw no fewer than thirty helmets emerge over one of the dunes. Surely the other dark rangers had already taken notice, but it was up to him to thin the herd a bit. He quickly nocked an arrow and pointed it at the closest figure he could make out, but no sooner had he drawn the string than a powerful wind swept through the canyon, bringing with it a storm of sand that momentarily blinded him.

Now, he had to guess. He let the arrow fly towards what he thought was the most appropriate direction, but there was no way to confirm the kill now. With his right hand now free, he swiftly pulled out a rag and wiped his face clean, restoring his vision. He then nocked another arrow and whirled to face the oncoming band of legionnaires and-

Pain.

Searing, agonizing pain erupted from his chest. Stunned, Arron dropped both bow and arrow and fell to his knees. He feebly grasped at his chest to determine what was wrong, but he found nothing. No wound, no abnormality, no foreign object. This was wrong, all wrong. Since his rebirth he had felt little more than dull sensation, a consequence of his soul’s imperfect attachment to his body, or so he was often told. But this? This was something entirely different. He had not felt pain of this magnitude since his flesh was warm and blood flowed in his veins.

Perhaps he should have expected something like this to happen. In truth, he had not felt the same since…

Lordaeron.

Yes, he had survived the battle, but felt himself get progressively weaker with each passing day. He could not explain why, and chose instead to merely ignore it, or convince himself that he simply needed to push through it.

But this… he could not ignore this.

Yet he had to force himself to overcome it, for in this position he could not be any more vulnerable. He snatched up his bow and arrow and struggled to stand, yet just as he set the arrow in its place did he find himself face to face with a large brute of a man, fully garbed in plate armor, screaming at the top of his lungs and wielding his blade above his head. The enemy had taken advantage of that single moment of confusion and somehow closed the gap, and now there was nothing left for Arron to do but die.

Shunk!

A sharp blade pierced the legionnaire’s neck horizontally in a weak spot between the plates. The legionnaire stood frozen as blood dripped from the exit wound. Arron turned his eyes to his left and saw, hanging from the hilt of the dagger, a small goblin clad in brown leather. Arron could just make out the goblin’s face and recognize his battlefield savior; Steamratchet. The diminutive assassin gave Arron a half-hearted wave with his free hand before pushing himself off the legionnaire with his foot, freeing his blade and causing his kill to collapse upon the ground like a bag of discarded meat.

“That’s one you owe me, Arron,” Steamratchet said as he swiftly slid the dagger back into the sheath on his hip. “How about you stop daydreaming and keep your peripherals clear, hm?”

Arron said nothing, for he could not find the words. Just as pain gripped his chest, so too did shame hold dominion over his mind. Once again did he come face to face with death and it was only through the timely arrival of another that Arron would be allowed to walk away. What would Kialdrys think? He remembered her face as she carried his limp body to safety in the aftermath of Lordaeron as he lingered on the precipice of his final death. He never wanted to see her face contorted like that again. Not over him.

Yet here he was, helpless once more. She would be so disappointed.

Steamratchet tapped his foot impatiently, as if disappointed with Arron’s lack of a reaction. “Oh, come on,” he said, “it’s really no big deal. Say, if you want to settle your debt now, we can. What do you think your life is worth monetarily?” The goblin dipped his index finger into his pocket and swirled it around. “Sure, your life’s got a lot of wear and tear on it, so let’s set the price tentatively at… oh, say, two gold pieces and ten silver?”

The provocative creature’s antics were nothing abnormal, but still Arron began to tremble with anger. Steamratchet started snickering, as if wholly pleased with himself that his jabs were producing a tangible effect.

“Oh relax, relax. Don’t get mad with me now. It takes an incredible number of muscles to frown, you know. And you can’t afford to expend the energy, after all. Why, if you pull the right muscle in your face the wrong way, suddenly your whole jaw falls off! And then where does that leave you? I’ll tell you; like one of those tongue-hanging freaks! And that will be the end of our association, my friend! For I have standards, after all, and those standards dictate that I must refuse to partake in conversation with one who can’t put his lips together!”

“Steamer?” Arron said quietly.

“Yes, friendo?”

“Shut. Up.”

Steamratchet simply shrugged. “Suit yourself. Be seeing you!” With a quick wink he vanished into the shadows, but he wouldn’t go far. Arron knew him too well. He would remain nearby and look for any and all opportunities to show him up on the battlefield. Again. But that was the nature of the goblin; his most annoying qualities often turned out to simultaneously be his most reliable, and today, to Arron’s disgust, that is precisely what saved his life.

The battle had died down, for now. The dark rangers and deathguards seemed to have little trouble in mopping up the remaining legionnaires. The echoes of battles fought elsewhere in Vol’dun reverberated in the distance. Kialdrys was somewhere out there with a platoon of her own kind. Blood Knights. Arron hoped she was having better luck than he was. He hoped that she would never find out about-

An arrow sailed through the air and landed in the ground, missing Arron’s left ear by a fraction of an inch. He whirled to his left and saw, on top of one of the dunes, the silhouette of an Alliance archer.

Twice in one day was twice too many. With fiendish, inhuman speed, Arron set his arrow and shot it at the figure’s head. It struck true and the the figure collapsed upon the dune, completely immobile. But that was not enough. With a haunting, ghoulish scream, Arron bounded towards his fallen foe, reaching the top of the dune in a matter of seconds. The archer was fully geared in mail, as were most of the marksmen in the army, yet somehow this mask seemed to deny him a sense of satisfaction. He yearned to see the face of his victim, to know to visage of defeat and gleeful display his own survival over it, and so he tore off the mask.

And then he paused.

Before him lay the face of a boy, no more than seventeen. Pale cheeks, strong jaw, and long blonde hair. It was a familiar sight, for it greeted Arron every time he looked in the mirror. At least, it did a lifetime ago. Back when his flesh was still warm and blood flowed in his veins.

Arron seethed with hatred. He despised that face. He needed to destroy it. It wasn’t uncommon for the forsaken to consume the bodies of their prey, some even thought it made them stronger for doing so, but Arron chose never to lower himself to the behavior of ghouls. He always prided himself on being above that, but this? This was personal.

When it was over, and the sickening sounds of the meal had subsided, there was very little left to identify whoever that young archer was. But, to Arron, this was as it should be. What did he feel now? Pride? Glee? Vindication? All of the above! Yet he felt it for a moment, only a moment, before looking up and seeing Steamratchet standing before him.

He had never seen that expression of disgust on a goblin before.

“You uh… you get what you needed out of that, friendo?”

Arron merely gave a slight nod. There was nothing more to be said.

“Good. Because we’re pushing forward now.”

Forward. Indeed. There was never going to be a way to go back. Never again. But despite this, whatever lay backwards still existed, and it made its presence known to Arron with a deep burning throb in his chest that alternated between intensifying and abating with every step he took.

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Great stories, well written and I’ve enjoyed reading each of them. I honestly didn’t think I would get much response with such a dark prompt thought. It was based on a dream sequence I get every so often and thought it would be interesting to explore with the characters :3

This week’s prompt was dark, but next week will be far more whimsical. :smiley:

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