It is time for the Hero Concept Showcase. Remember that the purpose of this is to get together the hero concept community and bring them together for some feedback of some very special concepts. This is in no way a contest. That being said let’s get this showcase started!
Really awesome that you did this SunDragon, glad I made the cut! All of these concepts are exemplary in detail, props to everyone who made them, and to you SunDragon who posted them all together!
I apologize, but I didn’t see the doc until recently, and when I tried to access it, it made me request the access. I will add it when I get the access.
It’s fine
I did not realize it had defaulted to restricted access. I thought I checked it and it was fine. I was wrong.
Sides all these guys put in way more work. I just converted an old rework suggestion into a new character like a day or two before your showcase post.
I just always appreciate feedback in case things seem broken or unfair to people.
Which one was yours? If you are like me you like any feed back
First off I love the amount of detail you put into her personality. Especially all the voice lines and interactions.
I have 3 questions.
For owl meka’s primary is that a close range weapon with projectile’s too? If yes shouldn’t they be separated so your not OP at close range doing double damage?
If I’m not misunderstanding you are out of mech like D.va after ult. What is your attack when mini luka?
If you can switch between station and meka do they share a health pool?
EDIT: I’ve fixed up the formatting in the PDF version I uploaded. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C1Hc4dLeUFjooUSYMStMTGkwEn64FngpSieY1x2szaU/edit?usp=sharing
@darkdill
Overall I like psych especially think the Intel gathering is clever. I am a former Symmetra “main” after all. I do have some suggestions and comments tho. Also since your doc is still locked to me and I’m on my phone I can’t switch back and forth to double check things. So sorry if you handled these already and I forgot.
The primary if it is going to have a homing property it need to be glowing and a slower projectile like pharah or junkrat.
These psy stacks of yours need a bit more limitations like it takes 4 needles to apply one, and prolonged or burst healing needs to clear them (say over 100)
(I really appreciated that you broke down the match up’s but I did not agree with one as you will see)
About that stack detonation it needs to both Immobilize and light up the target before detonation and a Zarya bubble should clear that as well.
Other than that everything else seemed cool so long as I understood the ultimate to a bit before locked on.
P.S. @everybody I will eventually get to everybody who reports in to this thread or asks for my opinion. Just don’t take offense this just how I critique things if I did not think the concept had merit or thought it was to broken I would not bother
Feel free to take apart mine or the one on the PTR feedback forum as "completely original idea"
I did yours first. I mentioned I liked her personality and all the work you put into it. Other then that she seems to play as a combination of pharah, d.va, and sym 3.0. Three characters who’s game play I’m not to fond of that’s why I only had those 3 questions