a) Positioning - You stand in one area for too long and don’t rotate your position enough. That means that the enemy team knows exactly where you are and that’s why the rein was able to get to you several times.
At the start you could have rotated to high ground or taken an off angle and you didn’t, instead you were right behind your tank on a sniper character. Taking an off-angle would’ve taken the pressure off of your team because it forces the enemy to look in your direction. Rotate off of that area if they start pushing towards you.
b) Focus on low health targets/Target Priority - There were several instances where you just shot whoever was in front of you instead of focusing on supports who were already low.
c) Ult economy - I counted 3 times where you used BOB immediately after getting your ult. Try to plan out your ult a bit more, wait for Mei wall to be used or bait out sleep dart first so that you can get more utility out of your ult.
Sorry this is going to be long and these are merely observations based on viewing the replay.
4:37ish - You could’ve rotated back to apply pressure to the enemy that was pushing into your team, instead you just stood there and did nothing. Right after that you rotated back while your tank was pushed forward and your tank died alone, you could have helped apply pressure there.
5:23 - You’re waiting to get healed. Your team is pushing forward, you could have rotated through the back alley to get the mega in the bar and applied pressure on the enemy team with your team. Always grab a healthpack (if you’re near one) if you find you aren’t getting healed.
5:33 - You can hear the Rein coming up to you, you overstay and get killed. It’s now a 5v4 and your supports have a Rein in their backline with no dps to alleviate pressure. To deal with that your supports use both support ults to keep your tank and team alive, your tank dies anyway. Your tank gets stuck between the rein that is now in the backline and the part of the enemy team that was in front of them. Your team gets partially wiped and the enemy team gets the checkpoint.
7:04 - You’re afk again. You could have rotated to low ground where the mega is to apply pressure to the enemy team. While this isn’t an ideal position it allows you to rotate back to the mega and take the opposing high ground with coach gun if needed. You being there to apply pressure would have limited what the enemy team could have done, especially since Rein was waving his shield around and your Junkrat was applying pressure from behind. You not being there allowed the rein to take high ground and challenge the Junkrat.
You were forced to reposition at around 7:51 - but quite frankly you should have rotated before then.
13 min - You waited until sleep and bubble were used but you still used BOB almost immediately after you got it. If, instead of sending BOB down main you went to the mega room on the right and put BOB in their backline the enemy wouldn’t have come out that unscathed.
14:18 - You tunnel vision on the Ashe, the enemy Mercy is reviving in front of your face. She’s standing still. You don’t shoot her. She revives the Ana. The enemy team now has two supports that are alive and the Winston jumps on you. If you killed the Mercy while she was reviving the Winston wouldn’t have been able to put pressure on you.
15min ish - The one time when using BOB immediately probably would have been a good idea because it would have allowed your team to push cart to the end. Instead you stay in the same spot you’ve predominantly been in for the last 7 minutes, get dived and die. Monke angry in your backline, your supports wipe, your team wipes.
16 min - You panic on shooting the mercy who, albeit is spinning her head is at the same level consistently. You have bomb too, and while it could have killed you. The mercy probably would have been dead and she may have not gotten the revive off. Instead you die, she lives, monke lives.
16:54 - Standing in lane with no cover. There’s a high ground area with cover and view of the high ground where the Winton is behind you. You die because you’re out of position.
Last fight was okay but it seemed like you were feeling the pressure of the match ending and you didn’t do as well. But positioning, etc in that part was fine. I’m not sure there was much more you could have done at that point, maybe someone else can chime in.
TL:DR - You stay in a single position too long, you rarely if ever rotate. I never saw you grab a health pack. You go afk a few times, stop that and find an off-angle. You use your ult like a cooldown, but you rarely pay attention to what the other team has to stop it (e.g. positioning, Mei wall, sleep). Turn footstep volume up and put on your headphones. Focus shooting supports, but avoid tunnel vision.
Finally things you did well:
- Your dynamites are generally quite good, no complaints about those.
- Your accuracy is good.
→ I have to go so I didn’t proof read this. Hope it helps.