...I want Astral Form in Wrath

id love to see astral form as an option.

What you did was good but I’ll offer a few options that may have ratcheted up the drama:

  1. Could certainly consider going all caps for ‘Astral form’, would give more ‘balance’ (cwid?) to the visuals of your post anyway…I don’t insist on it though.
  2. Definitely would have gone with at least one exclamation point after 'WOW" and ‘OUT’…really the only gross omissions
  3. Strong case to be made for at least one insult to the opposing viewpoint. Doesn’t need to be directed at anyone in particular or even that focused but it does need to be fiercely worded, something like: “All you retail crybabies can DIAF!”
  4. A threat to quit if they put in Astral Form seems like the right path for what you’re aiming for.

Again though, what you have here is pretty good…just keep that punctuation in mind next time.

1 Like

Well you know what they say practice makes perfect. I like your list but I think number three has a moderate chance to land me another ban depending who the mod is.

I will say me not putting number four in was a huge missed opportunity.

Haha, don’t sweat it dude, was a solid effort! And don’t think I missed that misspelling of ‘literal’…that was clutch! Having an innate sense of that kind of nuance will serve you well moving forward.

Ty good sir, you are a gentlemen and a scholar.

1 Like

This topic was automatically closed 60 days after the last reply. New replies are no longer allowed.