id love to see astral form as an option.
What you did was good but Iâll offer a few options that may have ratcheted up the drama:
- Could certainly consider going all caps for âAstral formâ, would give more âbalanceâ (cwid?) to the visuals of your post anywayâŚI donât insist on it though.
- Definitely would have gone with at least one exclamation point after 'WOW" and âOUTââŚreally the only gross omissions
- Strong case to be made for at least one insult to the opposing viewpoint. Doesnât need to be directed at anyone in particular or even that focused but it does need to be fiercely worded, something like: âAll you retail crybabies can DIAF!â
- A threat to quit if they put in Astral Form seems like the right path for what youâre aiming for.
Again though, what you have here is pretty goodâŚjust keep that punctuation in mind next time.
Well you know what they say practice makes perfect. I like your list but I think number three has a moderate chance to land me another ban depending who the mod is.
I will say me not putting number four in was a huge missed opportunity.
Haha, donât sweat it dude, was a solid effort! And donât think I missed that misspelling of âliteralââŚthat was clutch! Having an innate sense of that kind of nuance will serve you well moving forward.
Ty good sir, you are a gentlemen and a scholar.
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