Oh it’s on circuit, do you have a different code? Not as much i can say on how/when to utilise cover or positioning as much on or how to get more effectiveness with the hero:P circuit is a very outlier type of map because there is just one lain basically.
What i saw in the first minute though is that you reload when not needed on zarya and are throwing rightclicks into a dva while you are not looking at your illari who is getting shot at by a widow. You wont be doing anything with 0 energy except for when you are throwing rightclicks at the widow who is scoped in. Your first death is caused because you isolated yourself in a small room just one bubble.
The bubble at 1:45 is good, but pretty slow, at 1:47 you could have walked infront of illari incase someone chased her to bodyblock the damage.
Also do you play with allied health bars and allied friendly outlines on default or do you have them off?
Because it seems you dont know where your illari is at before you bubble him because it takes a while for you to look at him before you bubble.
At 2:37, if you walk directly infront of the dva bomb and bubbled you would have saved both illari and sym. But you walked backwards and then bubbled and they died because of that.
At 3:27 you are lucky that dva didn’t eat the grav. But you also graved too early. Dva still had allot of matrix and the had rally going on+ a shield. You bubble yourself instead of the phara who would have maybe lived otherwise during her ult.
If you bubble the phara she can kill the soldier for sure during her ultimate.
If you grav after the rally expired then you can kill someone because you can cut through defence matrix. Even solo graving a ulting soldier for example is worth it because your teammates can either kill him easier or get out of line of sight.
When playing zarya into that comp i would personally bubble my symmetra more than myself because she will deal a ton of damage without needing charge and it will give me charge.
So far i have not seen you look back towards your teammates once to see if they are in danger or not and need a bubble.
I just watched part of a game I played zarya myself. Code is : YPWHGE i am Siks7ate9.
It is a entirely different map though so that also has something to do with it maybe.
I usually play sigma on circuit myself because in diamond its a sniper fest.
While i played very poorly compared to what i can, (my aim is tragic for example and i make some really stupid mistakes) i noticed that if i compare it to your game from what i have seen so far i am much more of a threat. I am continuesly rightclicking squishies so they are forced to retreat or have to get healed instead of their tank. I am just literally walking up to them and making them shoot me instead of teammates.
While i am not looking back towards my teammates as much as i should be, its clear to me that they are not about to be killed because they play out of line of sight and and the few players who could hit them are all shooting at me.
I also notice that i am forcing their tank into rough spots or splitting off their healing by walking behind them and bubbling when they are low hp.
If you want to see some actual good zarya gameplay compared to how i played whilst i play support here is a game of my brother playing zarya on attack and rein on defence while i play ana on kings row.
Code is: F50Y1G
My brother is like diamond 1/masters 5 on tank and im diamond 3 on support. I have no idea how well i played since i do know i was pretty tired and it was 3 days ago. I do know i must have played fairly well to have died only twice that game. This was like a diamond 2 ranked game if i remember correctly.
My brother had 35 elims 9 assists and 3 deaths with 13,7k dmg on zarya/rein whilst i on ana had 13 elims 24 assists and 2 deaths with 2.2k dmg and 10.8k healing.