With that kind of rework, I’d swap snowball and icicle.
The snowball would have to at least hit 2 or 3 times within a timeframe before the freeze, because that meand in one hit they’d freeze, making her more annoying than a mayhem Brigitte stun abuser (mayhem Brig has a 1sev CD on Shield Bash) and a CC abuse machine. So I would recommend the snowball would slow down enemy to half speed instead.
As for keeping the icicle secondary, the icicle hits hard and consumes a lot of ammo, just like a hajj arrow or McCree Gun shot, it can OHKO with a headshot. But that’s where I think a rework like this would hinder her more. I could only imagine how little use she could get from any clip size for just snowballs and icicles. I do personally think her current works well, but it is true she’s not getting in the way of high mobility users. They could instead increase the range to that of a Moira drain, but fussy could be considered, “too much.”
How exactly would you change her ult? It’s not completely useless.
As for design, she is based inn the Arctic, below freezing, she needs all those layers, so it’s fitting. Also she’s a pudgy little Asian girl, so she’s already suppose to have a thick design.